The first is better quality, although both share the same rhyme/meter scheme.
AROUND YOUR LIGHT
Around the sun the earth revolves,
And I around your light;
When into dark the day dissolves,
I keep you in my sight.
WHEN OTHERS FALL
When others fall beside the way,
And fail to go the distance;
Don’t let your feet be led astray,
But win by your persistence.
Both written moments ago, this Easter evening, in order to mark presence on the aforesaid service.