Cloudburst: Time for Eternity

Time is a recurrent theme of mine, as subscribers to Cloudburst are aware by now. But I don’t think I’ve used the concept of an exchange (term repeated twice) before.

Here we answer the question, Why was I able to open my eyes this morning?

It’s been a while since I’ve used pentameter, I think, and longer since an ABABA rhyme scheme. Plenty of enjambment here, except for the last stanza. You might read resolution in that fact, dunno.

So I’m off to send to the email list, so what that’s it’s off-schedule?

2 Replies to “Cloudburst: Time for Eternity”

  1. Was holding this one in my inbox, especially intrigued by the title; finally got it open while clearing the mailbox today.
    Beautiful perspective, one we wish our world knew better.

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