As a comment to, and summary of the last paragraph of, Kathryn Haddad’s devotional thought today, I wrote:
To compare to Jesus, oh, what daunting chore,
The end of pride, the push to becoming more!
Let’s destroy the couplet and make it a triplet, with a tweak or two for good measure:
Compare to Jesus, oh! what daunting chore —
The end of pride, the push to becoming more,
To humble holiness the open door!
You did it!! 🙂
I was working on replacing “push,” which hasn’t yet happened, and the third line made a surprise show.