What’s wrong with this sentence?
… my frustration to find anyone at my new church who connected with me, my life and my needs.
If you can figure it out, it points up what’s wrong with the religious world and with much of what is leading many in the Lord’s church to go beyond what is written.
This is an actual quote I picked up on the Internet. I chose not to link to the page where I got it, so as not to pick on the individual. My concern is for the all-too-common sentiment.
Discussion is invited in the comments section below.