Cloudburst poetry: New style

New style for me, that is. No punctuation, which I normally hate. Shorter stanza. Variable meter. Still a rhyme, but not every line. I wrote one in this new style last week, now another, with, “No Foundation.”

Are my Cloudburst Poetry list readers confused, mad, stressed, unconcerned, oblivious?

OK, I confess: I’ve been reading Emily Dickinson.

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